POETIC DEVICES- CLASS XII (Flamingo)
An Elementary School Classroom in a Slum—Stephen Spender
Metaphors
• ‘gusty waves’ — the privileged children are compared to gusty waves —energetic and exuberant.
• ‘future’s painted with a fog’ — refers to the future of the slum children which has been compared to the fog because it is uncertain and unclear.
• ‘sealed in with a lead sky’ — refers to the dull and grey colour of the sky and also the depressing future of the slum children
• ‘stars of words’ — refers to the words or literature written by writers like Shakespeare that create images which are as bright, beautiful and inspiring like stars.
• ‘from fog to endless night’ — refers to the future of the slum children which is without any ray of hope, a future that can only go from bad to worse.
• ‘wear skins peeped through by bones’ — refers to the thin emaciated bodies of the children which has been reduced to mere skin and bones.
• let their tongues /Run naked into books’ — refers to the act of allowing children to go taste/experience the variety of life as depicted in the books or giving the children an experience of the beautiful bright world outside the depressing confines of the slum.
• ‘whose language is the sun’ — refers to the children who live in pleasant surroundings and thereby have happier lives.
Simile
• ‘like rootless weeds’ — the children have been compared to weeds or the unwanted section of the society.
• ‘like bottle bits on stones’ — The spectacles frame their stony-eyed expressions/hard faces.
• ‘windows that shut upon their lives like catacombs’ — the classroom and the homes in which the slum children lives have been compared to the underground burial chambers
Imagery
• ‘weighed down’ — refers to the burden of poverty and hopelessness that weighs down the slum children.
Pun
• ‘reciting’ literal — the boy is reciting the lesson. figurative — he is more prominently reciting his father’s disease i.e. he has inherited his father’s disease of twisted bones and deformity.
• ‘sour cream’: literal — the neglected walls have turned a dirty yellow figurative — a dismal place where all dreams turn sour (in this case the classroom)
• ‘lead sky’ literal — sky polluted with industrial fumes figurative: A sky that does not open opportunities.
Symbol
• ‘squirrel’s game’ — something that helps the child to escape the grim reality of his surroundings `civilized dome riding all cities’ — cities that show the progress of the civilization and its marvellous architecture also
Personification
• ‘open-handed map’ — a map drawn arbitrarily by the people in power and the privileged.
• ‘map with slums as big as doom’ — the grim reality of the lives of the slum children.
• ‘fog’ — bleak and unclear.
• ‘ships and sun’ — adventure and beautiful lands offering opportunities.
• ‘slag heaps’ — industrial waste, toxic filth and squalor.
• ‘windows’ — windows of the slum classroom do not open out to opportunities and the wide world. They show only fog covered slums where they are confined.
• ‘green fields, gold sand’ — colour, happiness, nature and golden opportunities.
• ‘white and green leaves’ — learning from pages of books and nature.
• ‘run azure’ — experience the rich colours of the blue waves.
• ‘sun’ — symbol of enlightenment /clarity/ equality/purity.
Repetition
Break O break open till they break the town
‘ Far, far’
A THING OF BEAUTY- John Keats
Poetic Devices
Metaphor:
• ‘bower quiet’-refers to a quiet shady part in the garden
• ‘sweet dreams’-happy dreams
• ‘wreathing a flowery band’-connecting to nature
• `pall’-a covering like a shroud
• ‘endless fountain of immortal drink’- refers to the deeds of great men and women that have made them a source of inspiration for people of all times
• The list of beautiful things is metaphors and symbols of nature.
Alliteration:
• `noble natures’
• ‘cooling covert’
• ‘band to bind’
Imagery:
• ‘flowery bands’
• ‘shady boon’
• ‘clear rills’
• ‘daffodils in green world’
• ‘grandeur of dooms’
• ‘cooling covert’
• ‘endless fountain of eternal drink’
Symbol:
• ‘simple sheep’ — refers to mankind as Christ is considered the shepherd who leads human souls out of the dark world of sins and temptations
Transferred epithet:
• ‘gloomy days’ • ‘unhealthy and o’er darkened ways’
Oxymoron
• ‘mighty dead’
MY MOTHER AT 66
Poetic Devices
• The imagery used in the poem is suggestive of both death and youth. The image of `young trees and merry children’ are a contrast to the mother.
• The poetic devices used are simile, metaphor, repetition and personification:
Simile — face ashen like a corpse, as a late winter’s moon.
Personification — trees sprinting
Repetition — smile and smile and smile
Metaphor — children spilling
Poetic Devices
Simile
1. Her face ashen like that of a corpse: poet sees mother dozing off with her mouth open, almost like a corpse — it seems to have lost all vitality — the grey colour of ash is usually associated with a dead body – triggers the pain of losing her mother who is close to death.
2. Wan, pale as a lath winter moon: reinforces the idea that the mother’s face was pale and lifeless like that of a fading winter moon. Winter is symbolic of the last cycle of the season — hence waning moon-mother’s frail health misted by age is indicative of imminent death.Poet resorts to escapism to avoid the harsh realities that stare her in the face-dispels the horrifying thoughts by diverting her attention to the images of the young trees and merry children.
Imagery
Merry children spilling out of their homes: youthful and exuberant, spring of life-contrast to the morbid atmosphere inside the car – the old mother weak, frail, inactive.
Personification
Young trees sprinting – the sprinting movement of the trees rushing past signify youth, life or passage of time. The mother – travelling in the car-lifeless, helpless decayed by age. Her instinctive awareness leads to the familiar ache-painful realization of helplessness (cannot share her fears with her mother-fear stemmed out of unknown-didn’t want to worry her)——- fear of separation-that childhood fear-inherent in all children-of losing one’s loved ones-fear of death.
Repetition
Smile and smile and smile: emphasis on the fact that she made a desperate effort to cover up her guilt, anxiety and agonizing thought of her mother’s impending death by putting up a smile to bid her a cheerful adieu.
KEEPING QUIET
The poem “Keeping Quiet” by Pablo Neruda is a unique blend of introspection retrospection, universal fraternity and abhorrence to war.
The poetic devices used in the poem are the following:
1. Alliteration – “we will”, “we would”, “once on”, “we would”, “his hurt hands”
2. Antithesis – “count to twelve and we will all keep still”
3. Repetition – “without rush, without engines”
4. Imagery – “Cold Sea”
However,there will be more figures of speech.I will be glad if you add up some more.
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Simile — face ashen like a corpse, as a late winter’s moon.
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I would also like to add , synecdoche and Allusion in the lines of " Shakespeare's head ".
Synechdoche since they are not only referring to his head but his entire identity and literature is not known to the slum children and is not their necessity at that moment.
Allusion since he is a famous person and his name is included in the poem. Allusion also for tyrolese valley.
Inclusion of famous people or places in a poem is Allusion. Feel free to correct
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